Shoe...

my shoe.. duh

I saw my shoe
all broken and torn
and wondered how it felt,
it was beaten up that's for sure
worn even through its sole,
but was it proud
of its vigorous runs,
its mountain climbing too?
It walked through snow and ice,
survived three dogs,
and the smell of my feet,
pee ewww...
So was my shoe a warrior
or an article of clothing
this question i leave to you....

(I need new shoes)

Axel Zendikar

Author's Note

I really wrote this about my shoe! lol

Reviews

[Clemmy]

will get you a new pair of scandals.... great stuff there man, I love stuff like that that is so simple yet I can sense bigger issues lurking behind the scenes, your style man is good... like it..

[Moth Phoenix]

Fantastic poem :D
Thanks for checking out mine =]]
it is very similar lol :DD
Awesome job!!
My converse sneakers are broken and torn hahaha :-P

[Elizabeth]

This is fantastic!!! A shoe with emotion... what a great image!!

[Sasha]

Lol. Cute little piece on shoe appreciation. I like the rhyme and you told the story well.

[J.Black]

Haha! What a GREAT write!

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

this was an amusing poem. =) your shoes are qquite the troopers and im sure you do need new shoes

[truth]

I think your poems are great and funny - although not so funny if you dont really have any shoes. I couldnt help reading this like a song so maybe with the help of a guitar this could be a great tune - try it and you will get your shoes.

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

Shoes can definitely hold our souls in tack in many circumstances which makes them warriors in my opinion. I like the playfullness of this piece. Fun POV...

[Jennifer Pennington]

Wow..to be honest when i saw the title i thought of just how u randomly say shoe and i was like oh my god he's an idiot. But now that i have read it i can easily say that this is a pretty well written poem. I like it a lot Rob.

[MusicMartyrs]

hmm..i think if they took you up mountains they are warriors :)