Deja Vu

Eternal is life
the circle turns on
Trip once or twice
the adventure lives on

End where you begin
Begin where you end
Search in your soul
the answers within

Live in your subconscious
But awareness is the key
To the doors in your life
Just close your eyes to see

So trip on through the voyages
Of lives past and to come
When you're truly aware you will see
They are all scenes of the same one

Reviews

[Kerwin]

nicely imaginative......

[DaGirlNxtDoor]

good rite! i loved it! very creative!!!KEEP ROCKIN!!!

[Butterflymom]

This is very well done, and I like the idea of reincarnation. I've been a big Edgar Cayce fan. AWESOME.

[Anna]

Good Write.

[Sel Whiteley]

A very philosophical piece and the structure is able to show very clearly the idea of reincarnation and 'de ja vous'.

[Ben]

Very good, summer. There are no spelling or grammar mistakes that I can see. Good work, keep it up!