Suicide

Suicide

A Poem by AshCat

 

 

 

 

I'm crying on the inside.

I'm out in pain.

I want to find another friend so we can play a game.

It's called the game of suicide and this is how you play,

you hold your breath and close your eyes and on the

ground you'll stay.
 

© 2008 AshCat


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"It's called the game of suicide and this is how you play,

you hold your breath and close your eyes and on the

ground you'll stay."


that make chills run up and down my back

Posted 16 Years Ago


I liked this but it reminded me of someone I know... It almost seemed manipulative.
I liked this anyways. Great work. It's sharp.

-Elissa :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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AshCat
AshCat

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