I love you

I love you

A Poem by AshCat
"

just another lame poem..

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I Love you,

your everything to me,

you don't understand.

 

I Love you,

why can't you see?

I need you.

 

I Love you,

your eyes, your lips,

everything you do.

 

I Love you,

I can't live without you.

It's more of an obssesion

than anything else

 

I

Just

Love

You.

© 2008 AshCat


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Short & sweet. This is nice, quite refreshing actually. It's nice to read about the love emotions, there is so much anger/hate/bitterness/loneliness on here :P

Posted 16 Years Ago


I think you messed up on that first your. I think it's supposed to be you're as in you are everything to me.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 14, 2008

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