Adrenaline

Adrenaline pulses

Through high pressure arteries.

Brain crackles, electric

Eyes cast about wildly, seeking escape-

I am an overcharged battery,

Ready to blow.

Reviews

[Firebird]

I feel your electricity. Don't blow! Sit and breath ...

[Zugzwang]

Don't worry....I wrote that about a bad day at work! Breathing is good tho!

[Firebird]

Yup..I do it a lot! :-)

[WerTherBeDragons]

Enjoyed this - feel the pressure charge.... Got image of being chased by a horse...?!?!? - have just read your comments on my poem, hence the 'picture' that sprung to mind on reading yours!

[Zugzwang]

Yep, being chased by a horse would do it!!
Wrote it during a stressful day at work. Obviously didn't explode as I still have a job (!)

[Firebird]

Haha! I'm glad!

[alifeacoustic]

Maybe need to smash more TV's to get it out your system. :)

[Zugzwang]

Yar, well there's a bit of poetic license being employed there, I must admit. But if I smash my TV, how can I play xbox? I'm a total hypocrite. I admit it.

[alifeacoustic]

Oh, we all are. I still watch my favourite comedies and documentaries I download on my laptop, and my x box of course.