Afternoon

warm afternoon light

swaying trees perch over

the sighing blue sea

Reviews

[Molly Anna]

Short and sweet, I like it.
There is a soft spot in my heart for using the word warm in regards to light, and this poem includes my three favorite things in simple description.
Great job, I'm giving you two thumbs up! :)

[Zugzwang]

Thanks, Molly. I appreciatte the time you took out to make your considerate review.

[LinktheSlimeKnight]

This is a nice one. A sighing sea and the trees waving above paints a picture of tranquility. It's a good example of many words all being used well in a haiku.

[Zugzwang]

Thanks, Link.
I wrote this before I knew anything about haiku form....it's really just a 575 piece but I like it anyway. Reading some Issa now and enjoying it. Thanks for stopping by!