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i am a wash
of one extreme for the other
prettymuchcancelledout

i am aware of the edges that i measure myself against
a girl taking up too much space
too much time
not getting it right

my hands and my heart move to gentle music
bent in hopeful directions that are
simply and perpetually given to fumbling

f*****g everything up
a fistful of something unintentional

how do i handle myself
i want to run home

lay on the floor
crawl in her bed and sleep on flannel sheets
til everything is okay again

let me just stopbestill
comb everything back into place
where we can all just pretend to practice understanding
and i will forget to leave footprints in the snow

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[Bubo]

let me just stopbestill
comb everything back into place
where we can we all just pretend to practice understanding
and i will forget to leave footprints in the snow..........

I remember having such similar thoughts as a teenager, and still some days the uncertainity strikes
crippling............this is so emotional and honest, the words are fabulous and flow so well...........
even the affect of the squashed up ones, much like you feel I expect............really good reading you, and feeling so many thoughts.

[Micah_s5]

comb everything back into place
where we can all just pretend to practice understanding

love this line.

[M_S_Lay]

I dont know what to say, other then, it was beautiful and painful.
nice work

[Little Mouse]

I like the vunerability in this piece. You have a neat style. Hope to read more! -:3 )~~~