My Friendly Valentine

My Friendly Valentine

A Poem by Greg Agee
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Thoughts for others

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I would love it,
if I could catch and save
a beautiful day of Spring
Save it just for you,
Let you have it , on a day
when your feeling kind of blue

If I could build an Island,
I would give it straight to you
A place to find serenity,
A place to be alone

If you gave me
all your problems
I would throw them all away,
Giving you a needed break
A little time.to play

In reality, all these things
Cannot be done by me

I cannot build an Island,
Or catch you a Spring day
But let me do what I do best,
Promise just for you
To be a friend who will always be there
Will always love you, always care

© 2016 Greg Agee


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Greg Agee
Valentine words

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Especially loved the second verse "If I could build an Island..." So often love is mistaken for an obligation to constantly make a fuss when space and time to breathe and recollect oneself are worth so much more than a million roses. Beautiful words as always - I sincerely hope you spend this valentine with someone who appreciates your wisdom.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

8 Years Ago

I would hope the same for you my friend. Thank You



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Kind and beautiful words for Valentine day.
"To be a friend who will always be there
Will always love you, always care"
The above lines are perfect. Thank you Greg for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


I love that second stanza!
A very nice poem!
Keep up the great work!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

8 Years Ago

Alwaya an honor
Especially loved the second verse "If I could build an Island..." So often love is mistaken for an obligation to constantly make a fuss when space and time to breathe and recollect oneself are worth so much more than a million roses. Beautiful words as always - I sincerely hope you spend this valentine with someone who appreciates your wisdom.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

8 Years Ago

I would hope the same for you my friend. Thank You
I would love to have friends like you,real friends who dont always want something in return for being there for you,,those who actually do love you and care...you described a beautiful friendship,such a lovely poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

8 Years Ago

Humbled by your kindness, appreciative of t the time you took out of your day to read my little bit .. read more
At first, this poem inspires us to 'Imagine', then shows us the 'Truth'. It's really wonderful how you placed the rhyming words. . .carefully and wisely to express such great and friendly theme. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

8 Years Ago

Humbled by your kindness, appreciative of t the time you took out of your day to read my little bit .. read more
Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

i enjoyed reading it..you are welcome:-)
Daaaayum, so sweet and cute; I like it; I looove it (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

8 Years Ago

Humbled by your kindness, appreciative of t the time you took out of your day to read my little bit .. read more
CiNtsaLis

8 Years Ago

ahaha's anytime (:
These are sweet words. Friendship is great. Your punctuation is worse than mine. Enjoy your valentine!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

8 Years Ago

Spot on... Most keeps haven't a clue about punctuation. Confused them. I just started ignoring it. G.. read more

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Sherwood, AR



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