If you must....

If you must....

A Poem by Greg Agee
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Having a little fun with common ordinary words

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If its change you want, change everything
If its work you want, work with me.
If its time you need, take the time.
If you hold on, hold on tightly.
If you have goals, reach them.
If you want limits, set them.
If you wanna play, play on.
If you can run, run to me.
If you take a stand, stand tall.
If you must do something, just do it. right
If you are nice, you can be nicer.
If your thinking about it, hell, just do it !.
If you love, love your best.
If its a kiss, its the best kiss ever.
If your counting them doen, count me in.
If your going, go your own way.
If you'll stay, you can stay forever

© 2018 Greg Agee


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Greg Agee
Playing with words

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A play with words indeed, but what really impressed was how easily the words were flowing through my mouth as I read this one. This poem can serve as such a good reminder of how easily one can act in life. I guess i am going to come back here often to read this one, when i am lost ^^

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Greg Agee

8 Years Ago

Your to kind. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Thank You



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Excellent write! I love this! Many times, the second half of the line was unexpected or more far-reaching than expected, making this poem more fresh & original than expected. Second to last line: Either change to match ("If you must go . . . ") . . . or change your to you're (contraction of YOU ARE). Thanks for sharing. Always enjoy your unique POV.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


A play with words indeed, but what really impressed was how easily the words were flowing through my mouth as I read this one. This poem can serve as such a good reminder of how easily one can act in life. I guess i am going to come back here often to read this one, when i am lost ^^

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

8 Years Ago

Your to kind. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Thank You
It's a great poem sir! :)
Simple words to express something that not everyone can express.. :)
I admire all your work!
Thanks for sharing .. Keep writing ! :)

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Greg Agee

8 Years Ago

Your thoughts are much appreciated.Taking the time to critique my work is a respectable labour. You .. read more
Aswin R Prasad

8 Years Ago

My pleasure :) Your always welcome! :)

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