Part of Me

Romantic short prose

If you trace the tracks
that brought me here.
You'll find at every step.
A piece of you I take with me of dreams that once came true.
In all of me and all I do.
A part of me is you.

Author's Note

Playing with less words saying more.

Reviews

[Érenn]

And so i say love is eternal, but infinitely deep? No that would mean i understand love too well, which cannot be for i am yet to experience love of such depth. Yet what i feel is less is more is an understatement, if you wrote more, i might very well be finding myself in love of a different kind ^^

[Greg Agee]

I could never hope for anyone to get anything I write any better than that. You are becoming a romantic. Which is the Bushido.way, chivalrous, and rare.

[Érenn]

Thank you ^^ I loved your work as always

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Greg Agee,
"Part of Me"
We are like sponges as we keep and assimilate experiences and relationships.
"A piece of you , I take with me, of dreams that once came true."
Life moves on and with it lessons. I hope that you have good lessons to choose from
in life and in writing.
Blessings,
Kathy
PS
You might like my poem "This Soul."

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words led to good ending.
"You see, in all I am today,
A part of me is you. "
When two person become one in goals. A new life had began. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aswin R Prasad]

The one feeling I love to feel but hurts as hell ! ;) "Love" ! Love can make you you are and break you too..
Loved how you've wrote this poem,sir.. I don't know if I can comment on this.. I just feel I need to learn from everyone here.. :) Also loved how you described how love is never ending :)

Hope to see more.. Read more.. Keep Writing

[Greg Agee]

Thank you, so very much !

[Emily]

I love it!
Very nice poem!
Keep it up!

[Greg Agee]

Thank you my writer friend. I.hope to learn from your work as I read. I respect what I have seen very much

[zunie frost]

so sweet lovely write . i love this poetry . you are so creative

[Greg Agee]

I love to see young.people writing and reading romance. You do much for reading mine. Your kind words are appreciated. Thank YoU

[idiotproof--1]

wow this is really great thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed reading this. it's a very short poem but it has a lot of meaning in it. I think it's incredible that you got so much through in so few words. keep up the good writing.

[Greg Agee]

Thanks Proof, You humble me with your words

[m_w]

I love this, the idea that a piece of someone is always with you no matter what! Remindes me of the quote "Every person you meet is either a lesson or a blessing!" well said!

[Greg Agee]

Thank you for the kind review!

[CiNtsaLis]

*softly chuckling* This is so beautiful

[Greg Agee]

I think I love you, you manage to make me laugh whereever I see you've penned.

[CiNtsaLis]

*laughing softly* Oh thank you *blushes* (:

[Troy Henson]

This really packs some beautiful imagery and emotion. Less words and more meaning indeed. This is true love in its finest form. Finding this person is a challenge but you will most certainly know when you do.

Just wonderful!!

[Greg Agee]

You make me feel really good, thank you for your time