Weeping
A Poem by
z.chéri
Contradictions.
Autumn came looking
for Winter but instead found
me . We wept for warmth .
© 2018 z.chéri
Author's Note
Short little poem! I want to see how you guys interpret this poem so let me know in the comments below! I'm thinking of hosting another poetry competition soon; maybe a haiku one. What do you think? Have a great day! - Melody x (cheri)
Reviews
so emotional so expressive creatively written sometimes what the short poems deliver are powerful messages.
Posted 6 Years Ago
I simply loved this. Good job, it is a perfect haiku with a very wonderful meaning.
Posted 6 Years Ago
I simply loved this. Good job, it is a perfect haiku with a very wonderful meaning.
I'm weeping for Spring. Here in Michigan, Winter is holding on. Nice use of words dear Poet. I liked them.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
I'm weeping for Spring. Here in Michigan, Winter is holding on. Nice use of words dear Poet. I liked them.
Coyote
a scared soul hiding in the back ground of autumn
Posted 6 Years Ago
a scared soul hiding in the back ground of autumn
I like the first sentence, but I can't seem to figure out what the last sentence means. I like how you use a metaphor for being second best, nice job!
Posted 6 Years Ago
I like the first sentence, but I can't seem to figure out what the last sentence means. I like how you use a metaphor for being second best, nice job!
Beautiful- reminded me of a weeping willow- such beauty and grace- beautiful words🌹
Posted 6 Years Ago
Beautiful- reminded me of a weeping willow- such beauty and grace- beautiful words🌹
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Added on April 15, 2018
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z.chéri Melbourne, Australia
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*used to be simple melody*
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