Weeping

Weeping

A Poem by z.chéri
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Contradictions.

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Autumn came looking 
for Winter but instead found
me. We wept for warmth.

© 2018 z.chéri


Author's Note

z.chéri
Short little poem! I want to see how you guys interpret this poem so let me know in the comments below! I'm thinking of hosting another poetry competition soon; maybe a haiku one. What do you think? Have a great day! - Melody x (cheri)

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so emotional so expressive creatively written sometimes what the short poems deliver are powerful messages.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I simply loved this. Good job, it is a perfect haiku with a very wonderful meaning.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I'm weeping for Spring. Here in Michigan, Winter is holding on. Nice use of words dear Poet. I liked them.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


a scared soul hiding in the back ground of autumn

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like the first sentence, but I can't seem to figure out what the last sentence means. I like how you use a metaphor for being second best, nice job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautiful- reminded me of a weeping willow- such beauty and grace- beautiful words🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on April 15, 2018
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z.chéri
z.chéri

Melbourne, Australia



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