January

New beginnings

                                                 January came
like a severe blizzard and

                            I stay crestf
                                    al
                                           l
            en.  

Author's Note

I tried to put my haiku into a more interesting form. Hope you like it! - Melody x

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

I like it. It's modern and creative Melody.

[Priyanshi]

Good try
haiku is good, Melody.

[wordman]

looked creative to me,and the haiku was right on
what more could you want

[Abraham George]

Experimental ? nice try. Haiku genius Queen.

[Mr.Writer]

Woah! I really liked the haiku as there were different emotions and feelings placed in like sadness, despair and dissapointment, and the form made it more engaging!
Well done, keep it up :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wonderfully done....keep going dear.