Neptune

Neptune

A Poem by z.chéri
"

He was like you and I but so much more.

"
He was Neptune.
Showered with compliments
that shine out of him
like the diamonds that
rain on Saturn.

He was Jupiter.
Powerful and strong
but always having an
unsettling mystery 
red-eyed storm.

He was Pluto.
Mostly forgotten
but remaining important
and spoken of when
seen properly for the 
first time ever.

© 2017 z.chéri


Author's Note

z.chéri
I realised that I mostly always use girl pronouns when describing a person. I'm not sure why. I did it using boy pronouns and i think it fitted nicely. (I don't mind if you decide to switch it to girl pronouns or whatever.) Thank you all for the reviews! - Melody x

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nicely penned....keep.going.

Posted 7 Years Ago


𝒢𝓇𝑒𝒶𝓉 𝓌💮𝓇𝓀
Grêå† wðrk

Posted 7 Years Ago


Far-fetched comparision. I liked the third stanza a lot.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Good try and well written it.
keep on writing.


Posted 7 Years Ago


you created the moods of a man,using the zodiac was crearive

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on August 23, 2017
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Tags: planets, Pluto, Saturn, Jupiter, stars, space, feelings, compliments, powerful, strong, mystery, storm, forgotten, shine, diamonds, rain, important, remaining, spoken, appreciated, he, him, unsettling

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z.chéri
z.chéri

Melbourne, Australia



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