The listener

Always be you.

The listener didn't listen
for once and that caused
destruction in their life

but somehow they fell 
in love with the chaos.

The talker didn't talk

for once and that caused
them to feel a little uneasy
as their voice wasn't heard
during the rumble of fairness.

The silent talked and 
the loving bled their

deepest sorrows and 
people didn't know how
to retaliate them.

The lost were found
and all was well until

the living found a way

to escape the hardships
that life always provided.

Author's Note

I really like this one. Thank you for all your kind reviews! :) - Melody x

Reviews

[C_theSurrealist]

The poem is very creative and I love it. Keep writing and good job.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is absolutely wonderous
i loved it
very thought provoking good work

[Joey Nizz]

The flow of your words in each sentence was perfectly made,the expressions coming out of your words made me see and feel.

Thank you for sharing, this has been a good read.

[Jay-LH]

Awesome! Well done, keep it up

[lostinthewaves]

My favorite part is the verse beginning with "The silent talked", very moving. The only thing I'd say is spoke might flow better but regardless the poem is beautiful.

[Najam Us Saher]

Creative, the message was nicely conveyed. Beautifully written.

[wordman]

sounds like two ppl arguing,fell in love with each other during the chaos,but found a way to overcome lifes tragedies

[Mr.Writer]

A creative, realistic and different piece ...
Well done, keep it up!! :)

[Elizabeth]

wow...just wow..this was just amazing!! i really loved the flow of the poem.