Honey
A Poem by
z.chéri
There is much more to looks.
Sweet like honey but
she will deceive you so please
don't fall for beauty.
© 2017 z.chéri
Author's Note
:) - Melody x
Reviews
A short poem, but have much depth, its really hard to express so much in so little lines, this is really nicely written :):)
Posted 6 Years Ago
A girl in a mask can show much beauty than she who paints with bright colors, if magnifying glasses were only to cover the eyes, we would have to love from very far.
Posted 7 Years Ago
A girl in a mask can show much beauty than she who paints with bright colors, if magnifying glasses were only to cover the eyes, we would have to love from very far.
nice.....so nicely written...
Posted 7 Years Ago
nice.....so nicely written...
you are a haiku expert . for me i just wrote one and its hard to give a meaning in these three lines
so beautiful
Posted 7 Years Ago
you are a haiku expert . for me i just wrote one and its hard to give a meaning in these three lines
so beautiful
good one, dear...I loved the haiku...keep on writing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
good one, dear...I loved the haiku...keep on writing.
I have a few suggestions, this is good but would improve if it was longer. maybe having some details on why looks are deceiving
Posted 7 Years Ago
I have a few suggestions, this is good but would improve if it was longer. maybe having some details on why looks are deceiving
7 Years Ago
This is a haiku so it was difficult for me to add detail. Maybe I will do a continue one in this. Th.. read more This is a haiku so it was difficult for me to add detail. Maybe I will do a continue one in this. Thank you for your suggestion!
7 Years Ago
that's what i meant, like make a piece and go into more detail on the same subject
I agree with you.
Looks can deceive.
Short and meaningful.
Good haiku:)
Posted 7 Years Ago
I agree with you.
Looks can deceive.
Short and meaningful.
Good haiku:)
well sometimes we just can`t help it
Posted 7 Years Ago
well sometimes we just can`t help it
Again, nice message. Good job :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
Again, nice message. Good job :)
Exactly.....Strong message very well conveyed in a haiku....I loved it.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Exactly.....Strong message very well conveyed in a haiku....I loved it.
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z.chéri Melbourne, Australia
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*used to be simple melody*
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