Control
A Poem by z.chéri
We do what we do.
People think they are masters of themselves but we're never in control.
© 2017 z.chéri
Author's Note
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Quick little haiku! - Melody x
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Reviews
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ah!...quick pretty and nice.
great!
you're day by day writing amazing haikus.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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you are right and message is convinced. genius work
Posted 7 Years Ago
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I really like this. nice work!!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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Yeah...2oo% right...we are never in control..I loved the haiku..
Posted 7 Years Ago
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Nice work. Frankly, Ive never liked haikus, but this one is quaint. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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i guess our emotions really control us,and as the weather they can change quickly
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Yes! :) thank you!
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7 Years Ago
you`re welcome
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got the message it was quite clear
Posted 7 Years Ago
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Good Impactfull Short Lines.......Thats The Power Of Content.......
Posted 7 Years Ago
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True and wise...I really liked this one.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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You're really good at haikus dear. I liked this a lot. This is so true. Keep writing :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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Added on June 24, 2017
Last Updated on June 24, 2017
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z.chériMelbourne, Australia
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