Control

Control

A Poem by z.chéri
"

We do what we do.

"
People think they are
masters of themselves but we're
never in control.

© 2017 z.chéri


Author's Note

z.chéri
Quick little haiku! - Melody x

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ah!...quick pretty and nice.
great!
you're day by day writing amazing haikus.

Posted 7 Years Ago


you are right and message is convinced. genius work

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really like this. nice work!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Yeah...2oo% right...we are never in control..I loved the haiku..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice work. Frankly, Ive never liked haikus, but this one is quaint. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


z.chéri

7 Years Ago

Thank you!!
i guess our emotions really control us,and as the weather they can change quickly

Posted 7 Years Ago


z.chéri

7 Years Ago

Yes! :) thank you!
 wordman

7 Years Ago

you`re welcome
got the message it was quite clear


Posted 7 Years Ago


Good Impactfull Short Lines.......Thats The Power Of Content.......

Posted 7 Years Ago


True and wise...I really liked this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


You're really good at haikus dear. I liked this a lot. This is so true. Keep writing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on June 24, 2017
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z.chéri
z.chéri

Melbourne, Australia



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