Eternal flame

when your gone our flame will fade.

The rain trickles down my cheek,

Footsteps leave no trace,

A small sign of hope,

As I fall to my feet,

Memories of you and I,

dancing, laughing, a tail to tell,

But for you I see no future with me,

A love that wasn't meant to be,

It started at hello and ended with goodbye,

A soft kiss as I lay him to rest,

Free from my love,

As he leaves his body behind,

The Rain trickles down my cheek,

But tears still remain,

The knife drops as I fall to my feet,

I have no future not with you,

All I did was love you,

What this could have been still remains,

All the blood that ran from your vans,

Your still my eternal flame.

Author's Note

Review please :)

Reviews

[Dillon]

well donr used alot of emotion good job

[Justin]

that was well done, it has a lot of emotion in it, it is awesome how it talks about what someone is going through whenever they are going through bad times, overall a great poem :)

[Rochelle]

thank you I'm glad you like it

[yuki]

so did she kill her love? whatever it is this is dying love nicely done belle

[Rochelle]

She loved him to death and Killed him out of love but even when love can kill it still is sweet.

[yuki]

I figured that still a wonderful peice

[Rochelle]

thank you :)