C.R.Y

it's ok to cry

I cry for you,

As your tears look stone,

Your heart is beating fast and slow,

A clouded judgment,

 

Hiding light,

I see the pain within your eyes,

Scream away the sadness,

Push away the pain,

 

I see the power beating through your vein's,

Burning flames,

Fire so bright,

Darkness drown past the light,

 

Hear my screams,

See my pain,

Feel the hate that still remains,

Your shadow has grown it kills the light,

 

Your heart beat has stoped hiding in fright,

Speak of the sloes that roman in your heart,

See the lies that ripped you apart,

You have no need to break the love,

 

Stop hiding from the passion that lies in heavens above,

Deep in water drowning inside,

As you can't stop to cry,

I'm dying inside,

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Great choice of words, I really like the way you expressed this poem. I felt the emotion in this beautiful piece. Nicely written.

Kaze~ :-)

[Hibiki]

Good choosing at the words..
I like it..

[Rochelle]

I need to know if my writing moved any one, please review.