living for the end

I have always wonderd why we give life to someone just to see their life end. Why is the world so twisted with the only chance of serviving limeted. The people around me smile and live to life the fullest but no matter what, we will never reach our fullest pertenchal. We continue to life in the same way no matter how it kills the world we hold so dear. We lern to survive but it's not realy serviving if were just liveing till our last breath. but no matter how much our lives change or how diffrent we all are in the end we all give in to death and end the same way. leaving the world and everyone we ever loved behind, without death everyone would live in harmony or so you think but no one realy knows but if that was posible it would just not me the same. So till we join the one's we love in death as the people before us live as they once did so that one day we can be loved even when we have been taken from this world.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Tea]

We all can't help the way that we will die and we don't know when, where and how we will die. All we can is make the most in life take whatever is offered. Even though people have or are going through something really really bad just know that you have people all around that care and love you and are willing to help you in your time in need. Don't put on a fate mask on and hope for the best that no one will notice. Life is too short for that if you are having a problem let your friends in don't block them out.
Nice write :)

[Somethingintheway]

Interesting perspective. Good read but would be better if you revised it to remove spelling errors. Thanks for sharing was worth the read.

[Rochelle]

thank's you don't know how much i needed that