A Never Ending Promise

A Promise can last a life time

One girl, one chance for light but no longer living in fear of the world she once controlled but fear of losing control. As the girl reads all the stories of vampires and monsters she cries for them as the humans make them seem so horrible, as they think of them as beast’s incapable of real feelings. But they are more like the humans than they ever considered. For they hide from the truth as the demands hides from the light. A girl with the world hating her for what she believes in not what she is. She hides from the world she once controlled as the humans tack back what she stole.

                              

The girl only 10 years old has controlled the world since she was 5 but with no parents by her side she was lost in her own mind as the moon hit the light.  Her mother past when she was 4, she uses to tell her that the key to happiness was through a promise. The girl no longer believed what her mother said. A little girl lost with words as she hears a crowd of humans banging on her door.

 

 They have come for me she yells open the door and let them in, for I have Sinned more than you think. When I die tell them of my sorrow that they have coursed, as they call me a demand child for believing that demon’s and monster are just like them, tell them of my story of the great power a 10 year old girl could have and how she is proud of what she believe in. The door opened the humans with daggers in hand killed the girl with a blow to the chest.

 But just as she fell to the ground passing to the afterlife a boy with blond hair the same age as her ran in with tear filled eyes. Held her in his arms yelling you have done a bigger sine than she, you killed a human girl for loving and believing in me.

 

 The crowed of people yelled for she was a beast to them the boy’s tears filed the room, as the boy saw her die in his arms for he loved her no matter what, his love may be the only thing that was stronger than her life.

 

The boy was furious in his anger he changed into a beast a demon his skin was grey and hair white as snow the only thing of colour was a single red glove he ware for her, yelling out ‘you have killed one of your own; I made a promise to never let her life end without me by her side for she loved this world to much. But as you have made my proems brake you will regret the day you harmed my darling.

 

He banished all humans from the land but we still don’t know what happened to them. Some say they killed each other for food but others say you can see them in the darkness still hiding from the boy. As for the demon boy he is still trying to find a way to see his love again and he is still hanging on to the little girl’s promise.

 

Centuries have past and he is still trapped in a 10 year olds body. Constantly hearing his loves voice reminding him of the promise he brock.  But even banishing all the humans did not stop the pain he felt in his heart for letting her down.  The boy’s heart started turning to dust inside him for his love was no longer living. When his heart was fully destroyed he knelt down beside the little girls frozen body.

For their love was eternal like a flame that burn’s for centuries to come. As their love started from a young age it would burn brighter than ever as long as they kept their promise. You can hear their voices from time to time, but when the moon is full their spirit’s return to the place their promise was broken, they are known as the beginning of the new world.

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[Tea]

It's very well described a few spelling mistakes but it was very beautiful.

[Rochelle]

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