black as night

Black as night,

Red as day,

For i fear not,

For i am brave,

But my love is not the same,

I am trying to see again,

for i see not,

But hear all,

I an chosen to destroy,

For i am no human,

Not at all,

But is chosen to fall,

The sky is my calling,

But yet i am stuck,

Wingless with my luck,

Children cry for the fear of the night,

But the darkness has more light, 

Than light it's self,

Falling is all i can do,

As i fell for you,

Reviews

[Lassian Willow]

That is amazing... you should do some more like that

[Lassian Willow]

That is so good, but who is it dedicated to...huh!!!
LOL

[Rochelle]

no one lol

[Rhianne Ney]

"But" can be replaced by "yet" to make it more of a poem than a cut sentence(just a random piece of advice that you can ignore)

Anyway, this is a good poem and well penned, just shows how impossible love is for someone

[Tea]

Its soooooooo CUTE!!! I love it.

[Rochelle]

thanks

[Lassian Willow]

Thats ok