The Dream

this is a common dream of a young child,a kind of young that love sweets and desserts...

The Village of Desserts,made all by sweets,

Decors and accessories,are on top of it;

Doughnuts looped,around the Big City,

And a long Chocolate River,runs very slowly,

The Huge Nuts and Nips,found at the center of Village,

Then all patron's amaze,even if the young and age;

And beautiful Lollipops stands of different color,

Can fell its aroma and it's tasty flavor,

A Big Blue Clouds,are said to be a Cotton Candies,

It's precious light texture,that blend with jellies;

A very Fined Sugar rain,drops from the sky,

And directly falls,to every pieces of pie,

This is only a Dream,my Beautiful dream,

I wish this is real,not a nightmare of grim;

The Bread of birds,flying and tweets,

In the Village of Desserts,that made all by sweets.

Author's Note

this is a true dream of a young child i hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Dhaye]

How sweet this dream of yours, Kabayan. I also like candies, chocolates, and other sweets.
Let it rain with chocolates (I don't want sugar rain) LOL

This is wonderful. I enjoyed the presentation.

[jan xavier maniquis]

tnx Kabayan ^_^ v