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A love poem...

 

Down through the Alps, immortal, standing high

Whose feathers are the clouds of passing days

And whose sweet bosoms touch the milky sky

And whose faint breaths birth thick and gentle haze;

Upon the hills and valleys, laced with white

And brushed by bonnets of the passing clouds

There is beneath the mounts, a lovely sight:

Which please all mortal eyes: soft daisy crowds.

Of all unearthly, flowery June treasure

Of all the decors and bouquets of spring

Perchance, the fairest, by all equal measure

Yon daisies, in the moist glades, lingering

    And there where such soft blossoms dance and play

    Are you and I upon a summer day 

Author's Note

Painting by Maboysen
(All paintings belong to their respective owners)

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Classy. Good one Gleb............................

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thanks. :)

[Frieda P]

You have such a unique style Gleb, I would know it's your's from a mile away....this is a stunning read, but all your work is excellent, your poetry is always lace'd with artistic color.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you very much. I am honored.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure always :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think those above really look kindly to those of us below who are in love...

i think it makes them content...all of nature embraces love.

nicely done.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you for your kind words.

[A. Amos]

Gleb you my friend are true magican when it comes playing with word, always pleasure reading your work. Thanks for sharing

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you for the very kind review.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Scott Metro]

Very smooth weave with excellent descriptive words.
Beautiful write my friend.

Scott

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you very much.

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott.......

[MsJewel]

Breathtaking and beautiful. Your poetry is a dream.....

:) Julie

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you very much.

[Jack...]

beautiful my friend. I journeyed with this poem, felt the breeze in my hair and saw the flowers scented by love. Very nicley penned.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you very much for your kind words. I apologize I haven't reviewed your poems in quite a while. A bit busy.

[Jack...]

No problem my friend.