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A love poem...

 

Down through the Alps, immortal, standing high

Whose feathers are the clouds of passing days

And whose sweet bosoms touch the milky sky

And whose faint breaths birth thick and gentle haze;

Upon the hills and valleys, laced with white

And brushed by bonnets of the passing clouds

There is beneath the mounts, a lovely sight:

Which please all mortal eyes: soft daisy crowds.

Of all unearthly, flowery June treasure

Of all the decors and bouquets of spring

Perchance, the fairest, by all equal measure

Yon daisies, in the moist glades, lingering

    And there where such soft blossoms dance and play

    Are you and I upon a summer day 

Author's Note

Painting by Maboysen
(All paintings belong to their respective owners)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and a amazing poem. Good to find places far away from real life and celebrate being alive. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you very much for your kind words.

[Raymond Federle]

This is so very sublime and wonderful...great work Gleb!

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you very much for your kind words.

[AYVID N]

I was passing by and this poem just caught my little eye. It is a fabulous poem. You paint such pretty pics with your pen. Keep writing and shining!

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you very much for your kind words.

[Daniel Dawes]

Really well constructed poem and great use of words. Really enjoyed the read.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you very much.

[Rita L. Sev]

Beautiful, flowing romance in this well crafted sonnet, Gleb.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you very much.

[s y e]

Such a beautiful, sophisticated poem, Gleb. I love your writes.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you very much.

[Relic]

Nicely done poetry that is sophisticated and artful. Great job.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you.

[paddy d daly]

I think its not so much the daisies but the being there with someone where the daisies just happen to be, beautifully written...

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Yes. Thank you.

[Sapphire Naylor]

A beautiful poem! It is wonderfully written and flows amazingly. I truly loved this piece. Well done friend :)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Thank you very much for your kind words. :)