The Stream of Consciousness spills into the Sea of Self-Indulgence

The Stream of Consciousness spills into the Sea of Self-Indulgence

A Poem by Zatoichi
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Edited, bomb defused. Proceed with caution as the rocks are slippery.

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There's a word here that describes the word, from which you define the meaning of the word and the world of the Word, the distinction being one of momentous, monumental, gigantic and leviathanious import; (remember Shakespeare has forgiven all our literary arrogance.)

 

Never end a sentence in parentheses, if you want to be believed- better to be a believer on the Rock of Ages.

 

Icarus' body was found face-down in the Sea of Tranquility shortly after his controversial attempt at a world record.

© 2010 Zatoichi


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Zatoichi
edited re-mix.

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...
. these are compelling words ... there's much too much going on in your word world, oh word wizard ... and all of it is good news ... (or so it seems) ... parentheses? ... ah yes ... :) ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I had to read it again after I got to the author's note. I guess I was never one to pay much attention to warnings.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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