electric avenue

when the mania hits
call it inspiration
spare no perspiration
to reach your purpose.

find your words
under ground, all around
at your feet, ready to leap
when the fever hits
and slaps you awake to the possibilities.
continue to strive. stride past the obstacles

when not in full-flight overhead. let the dead make sense.

 

Reviews

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

This is strange.
Not that it's bad, I just didn't expect you to write something like this

at your feet, ready to leap

forced rhyming makes my stomach hurt.


I don't know. I feel bad giving a review that doesn't say I love every bit of it, but if I didn't already know that you wrote it, i wouldn't have guessed it.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very well said! I agree with Chloe somewhat though. I loved the message, but it maybe could've came without certain parts. But it gets your point across very well. Good write!

[Fear Corrupts!]

Hmm,
some good messages passed in this piece.

Well Done,

[ Fear Corrupts! ]