In dreams

In dreams

A Poem by Zatoichi
"

sometimes it's the only way

"

Having slept away
the indecision of yesterday,
I rose with the sun and rowed until sunset
when I made camp on a bank of the Nile.


Before me, the rush of water drowns the sounds
of the voices inside; behind me,
the warm glow of city lights surrenders to the night
the amber melting into the blue-black velvet of eve,
the sky pierced by a scattering of stars, while


alone under moon and Mars,
without thought for property or propriety,
the river flowing freely thru the dark places,
i rest soundly, surrounded by the glory of God.

© 2008 Zatoichi


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This is unlike anything you write.
Or maybe I just don't read enough.

First verse is very cheesy.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Zatoichi
Zatoichi

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