gypsies

gypsies

A Poem by Zatoichi
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for those loved and lost

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I've been wandering for so many years
but never getting very far.
I love so many I'll never see any
more and see so many I'll never love,
wandering in circles ever narrowing, never getting very far.

© 2008 Zatoichi


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In love with this poem. It reminds me of a Beirut song. I don't know if you have heard of them, but my favorite song by them is Scenic World. I can relate 100 percent to this poem. Great great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is an excellent short piece
i love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel you in this poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've been wandering for so many years . . .

the best poems are the ones that we can step into and feel at home in

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

witty.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great. I think everyone at one time or point in their lives can relate.

Nice Write!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know exactly how you feel
I can see exactly what your talking about.

it could be the 4 oclock buzz
or maybe im just depressing and I hate the fact that its impossible to get anywhere on a rotating ball called earth.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

man you fit entire continents in tiny passages, youre rad.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Zatoichi
Zatoichi

Laguna Niguel, CA



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