the last last chance

the last last chance

A Poem by Zatoichi
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haiku

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The last minute past,

last tired roses purchased, last

Christmas together.

© 2008 Zatoichi


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I'm confused by the syllable count. I think it might be the onions that I ate earlier. I love a good haiku - they rock!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Zatoichi
Zatoichi

Laguna Niguel, CA



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