Secrets secrets are no fun...

Secrets secrets are no fun...

A Story by Steven Norton

"Sir, this is Major Brickle. I'm in a f-18 fighter plane over the crisis area. It seems our information was right sir. We finally found the thing that caused all the strange accidents in the Bermuda Triangle. Actually it's not just one thing, it's probably a whole new species. We've encountered one and are currently attacking it with all we've got. The creature appears larger than we initially expected. I tried hitting it with my rockets, but I think I only pissed it off. It seems this creature is extremely territorial. Ever since we've entered the triangle we are under constant attack from this enormous beast. I fear our carrier is under severe danger. Nuking the creature might be the only option, though i doubt we can take it down once the creature is under water. I spotted several other of these worm like creatures in this neighborhood. Our scientist onboard the carrier have sent you some info concerning the size of this animal. They base their data on the observations they were able to make during our attack. That thing is unlike anything we've ever seen before.

 

It might not be safe for our aircraft sir. These animals, if one can call those things animals, have enormous reach, I could barely pull up to avoid collision at 10,000 feet. I don't think the slower bombers will be able to do the same... What do you mean they're already in the area? Sir! You must be joking, those planes are in danger! We gotta pull back! Pull back!

The secret of the Bermuda Triangle is too big for us Mr. President!" 

© 2010 Steven Norton


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very VERY well placed. Seems to give one a more mind set into thinking about what really goes on in the bermuda triangle. I think you use this later. Maybe even add the radio response of the president, telling him that the bombers are moving in. Something like that

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Added on December 29, 2009
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Steven Norton
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