Play with Nature

Play with Nature

A Poem by Syke

TwT

Two forces meet in a clearing

Nature subjected

Man Objects

Something gives

Progress continues onward.

 

 

Progress is eternalized by society

Force of Nature is subjectified

Man objects

Something has to give

Machine is victorious

The march continues forever ownard

Progress continues unstoppable

 

The little stump

Sits there

Surrounded by it's children

© 2009 Syke


Author's Note

Syke
Try reading it aloud.

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This has been the battle won by man, as few would view it. The nature, as always, gives in to cruelty. But, the victory isn't really much of an accomplishment, at least, not for some.

A Nice piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It does sound better read aloud, but I think the rhythm needs a little work.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 23, 2009

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Syke
Syke

Phoenix, AZ



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