lies

lies

A Poem by Syke

Mired in our lies
I try to seek out a truth
Is it there to find?

© 2009 Syke


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Drives the point home in no uncertain terms! Good use of clear, precise language.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Short but powerful, and straight to the point. Good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Lies are sure here to hide something
But truth always come up, so Lies don't stay in the dark forever

"Mired in our lies
I try to seek out a truth
Is it there to find?"

Short, precise, and clear .. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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How about seeing the truth and ignoring the lie. Lies are there to hide something.

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Added on January 10, 2009

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Syke
Syke

Phoenix, AZ



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I'm a full time student with a knack for technology and a love of challenge. I've got a natural knack for manipulating languages, as well as understanding complex math and science. I read very quickly.. more..

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