Pain

Pain from any wound
Can not last eternally
Just until we die

Reviews

[Syke]

Thanks for the review, and so quickly too! A lot of the times I write Haiku because in cases like this, it can be really fun and tricky to deliver a complex message in a short amount of writing, but I think I was pretty successful here. The message will be different for everyone, but I meant it roughly as "Nothing follows you past the grave", a little simplistic I know (and maybe a little morbid and cynical), but it oddly comes out to a quasi-religious method, a hopeful one I hope.

[Guardian]

This was a nice little poem. The subject matter was interesting and has definite potential for more thought at a later time. The structure was great. Good job!