Girls...

Girls...

A Poem by Syke

 I really hate girls

They are just so annoying

Sources of all joy

© 2008 Syke


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You rushed this one and you know it!
Where's the observation? I really couldn't get into yer mental. Were you attempting a bit of shock while utilizing reverse psychology? Nay, it isn't a rush 4 my mental...and the only physical observation was maybe that of you contemplating writing this Haiku...for what that's worth...I'd rather have had something (an physical observation perhaps) more splenderous at the position of the last verse of this Haiku.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like this very much. It's a new way of saying "Can't live with them; can't live without them." Good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You rushed this one and you know it!
Where's the observation? I really couldn't get into yer mental. Were you attempting a bit of shock while utilizing reverse psychology? Nay, it isn't a rush 4 my mental...and the only physical observation was maybe that of you contemplating writing this Haiku...for what that's worth...I'd rather have had something (an physical observation perhaps) more splenderous at the position of the last verse of this Haiku.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 29, 2008

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Syke
Syke

Phoenix, AZ



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I'm a full time student with a knack for technology and a love of challenge. I've got a natural knack for manipulating languages, as well as understanding complex math and science. I read very quickly.. more..

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