Religious Flame

Religious Flame

A Poem by Syke

 Christianity in ascension,

Burning everything they can put torch to,

First raging like religious fever,

Soon the whole world is incinerated

© 2008 Syke


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Interesting, short, and to the point. Neat concept, but do you really want to put Christianity in such a negative light? The burning could be changed to something like "purifying," though less cheesy. Overall, well-written, though it may not carry the effect you intend.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on December 9, 2008

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Syke
Syke

Phoenix, AZ



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