If only I could...

If only I could...

A Poem by Syke
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A little longer this time. I guess it's prose.

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If only I could impress upon you,

The feelings that burn deep within my soul.

You are my heart, my soul, my muse, my love.

 

If only I could borrow a minute,

I might assist you in understanding,

The conflict that threatens to end my life.

 

If only I could let my self be free,

Of the shackles that tie me to you,

Unbreakable bonds of true devotion.

 

If only I could give you just one kiss,

And transfer the passion from me to you,

Boiling your blood, Stealing just one breath.

 

If only I could learn how to be brave,

so I coulf fulfill every single if,

and never falter on the path I tread.

© 2008 Syke


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Author's Note

Syke
fixed grammar problems

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Yes it is prose poeticprose only spoilt by typos.Poetry needs meter
The varation in line length interrupts the smoot flow when read aloud

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Syke
Syke

Phoenix, AZ



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I'm a full time student with a knack for technology and a love of challenge. I've got a natural knack for manipulating languages, as well as understanding complex math and science. I read very quickly.. more..

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