MY LIFE

  Lonely on the land I walk,
Lonely cross the sea I sail,
Lonely air of beach I stroll "
This lonely life doth take its toll.

Lonely trek of woodland trail,
Lonely mist in haze o’ dawn,
Lonely spies the bird of prey
In lonely circles all astray.

Lonely be the dark of night
When sleep is but a yearning wish,
To dream of sweet companions close,
As wine would pair with diner's dish.

Lonely do these thoughts me make
That draw my blood of precious life;
Replace with stream of flowing pain
To bless my veins with coursing strife.

Lonely years are now my friends,
Lonely cries bereft of sound,
Lonely tears that cool my face
In lonely life of sullen pace.

Reviews

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one do read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

[LetMeLaughLetMeSing]

My mind is pretty blown. This can't be your first. It's way too amazing. *smiles* keep it up!

[marybeth davis]

i love this , it really speaks to me like there is just more than life

[Brianna Brie]

Wow...really? Your first? I have seen many people write for years and not accomplish a poem like this one. Keep writing! The rhythm is good, and the creativity is at its best :)

[solitar]

ok
this is my first poem

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is beautiful written.
Keep up the good work.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Daytonight]

Beautifully written but yet so very poignant. Keep on penning.