The real love

The real love

A Story by solitar

One day there was a  girl behind a man

The man said why you are walking behind me. You want something

the girl:  I saw you the beauty and appalled I have loved you

The man smiled and said: really

The girl : I did not see one  like you.You are attractive

The man said is true but look behind .he is Better than me

the girl did not  find the person behind , she said: Where is?
The man said if you really loved me you would not see behind you

© 2011 solitar


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This is deep, well done.

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Deep deep emotion...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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hey my name is zack .I am 17 yersold I looooooooooooooooooooooove writerscafe more..

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