Defining Death
A Book by Zak Jones
 In a new house, Isaac Palmer becomes brutally tormented mentally and physically by an unknown intruder. A sinister twist lies in wait as he desperately tries to protect himself and the ones he loves.  © 2013 Zak Jones
Author's Note
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I would love to hear opinions on my work. I've been told I paint a vivid picture of intense, adrenaline-filled scenes but I question my less exciting writing. As of right now, many sections are a little bit play-by-play and still need to be fleshed out. I think I've paced it well between dialogue/story-building/and action but if any parts seem too long or not long enough, I would appreciate feedback.
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