...FAKE FADES AWAY...

 

...FAKE FADES AWAY...

 

Don’t know why?

I feel this way

gotta be someone else

To make you stay

But when the role ends

I have no friends

Can’t wait till this ride ends

 

Do you ever feel this way, friend?

If I ever ask you, how you feel?

Cause it’s so cold out here

a story of blood and pain isn't this unfair?

Do you ever think of sharp objects?

Tell me secrets that you conceal

I wish something about you was real

 

I wish you would talk to me

I hate every second I spend

With you

Did I offend you, friend?

I have reasons if you talk to me, friend

My friend, why were you never my friend?

it’s not hard to see you, right now I can see through you

 

love is trust, not jealousy

but you never trusted me

you left me in confusion

you left me with no conclusion

Are you alive? Are you real?

Do you have scars that won’t heal?

Do you even have a soul?

 

 I wanted you to stay, but fake  fades away,

What was  never real, can't be mend

Do you think about the end?

Cause I have no time left to pretend, my friend

And

Right

Now

I am thinking about the end.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mrudula Rani]

Fake fades away, not before doing its damage. Your poem unfolds beautifully exploring your doubts and conformations about this fake personality, even offering help. Then ends on revelation that ... " fake fades away what was never real, can't be mended" !

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'FAKE FADES AWAY..'
Zaishaim,
This writing was very raw and filled with honest response. I feel like you have a way of expression which is very open and to the point. I hope that life is a place for you to find grace and good things. Of course people are where and with whom we share our lives and It can be sometimes so difficult and even traumatic. I love your open heart and way with words. Your gift of writing is beautiful.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Sami Khalil]

Fake muddies clear waters in any lake. It has to be uncovered, rejected and then save ourselves from the damage it will all do. Very important message on love, trust and fake enterprises.

[Suhd]

I like this poem a lot. It deals with your innermost emotions, not only yours it can be relatable to someone who's going through the same in their life.