Even A Monkey Wears A Dress

Even a monkey wears a dress,
Even a dog loves to keep its fur fresh.
Even a cat longs for a set of new coat,
Even a horse desires to have a suit.

Alas, a woman prefers to walk nude !
Alas,a naked man pretends to be good!
Alas,a little girl is forced to be a prostitute!
Alas,heartless peoples remain mute!

How,humans are superior to other animals,
If they can't be rational with prudent sense!
Why  are we so shameless to trade with women?
Curse upon us, the worthless-imposter men.

Reviews

[Chris]

Are you having to deal with the rainfall and the flooding? How we manage to add our sense of tone to our words - biting sarcasm, resignation, desperation ...the depth of resolve or even sadness is unique to ourselves.

Life isn't fair but it's all we have available to deal as we must. Sometimes we have the strength to be human and sometimes we have the weaknesses to wish we weren't.

[Xerclipse]

God has his own image on humans, which are his perfect image. but animals represent pure innocence. Keep up the good work though.

[Destinyxi]

This is a really creative poem, good job!

[zainul]

Thank you for the inspiration.

[Sean Allen]

Of all of God's creation, if you believe that sort of thing, the only thing not made of dirt is woman.

[zainul]

Thanks for the great comment.
You have a wonderful verdict.

[zainul]

Thank you Chris for the philosophical statement.

[zainul]

Thanks Marble for the great review.
I will try to revise this over time.
Cheers!

[Becky]

The message was powerful, but the method in which you delivered the first stanza seemed a little sloppy to me. Also the many "alas"s kind of took away from the overall effect. That's just my opinion, the main idea was good but the wording could have been better.