The Rose

An angel may be too near of an amorous person. But she may be far away for him to approach her.

A morning bird beckoned me here,
To meet  my angel longing to share.
I felt too shy to gaze at her face,
What charm is there,I can't trace.

I saw the soft lips with very light hue,
What magic is hidden there,nobody knew.
I craved to touch the wonderful lips,
The bird stopped me to offer some tips.

I stared deep into the skies of the eyes,
I saw there rainbows playing with butterflies.
I craved to move my fingers over the gems,
The bird stopped me to offer  other games.

I looked at the thin pink-colored ear.
It was so lovely with the simple gear!
I stooped to see the type of the pierce,
The bird stopped me,it looked fierce!

I switched my vision to the  golden fleece,
That covered the head of my lovely bliss.
I moved to examine the sparkle of the hair,
The bird stopped me saying  it would not be fair.

With broken heart, I looked at her nose,
I saw with pleasure, it bloomed like a rose!
I opted to get closer  and take some smell,
The bird happily sang and wagged its tail.

Reviews

[Saddam]

this is very dearful natural poetry, I like willium Wordsworth poetry of nature, and this was like one of them. Not for comparison it is truly. Very imaginative and we can see your deep eyes on nature.
I stared deep into the skies of the eyes,
I saw there rainbows playing with butterflies.

[zainul]

I feel very honored and inspired by your admiring review.
Thank you dear poet for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Saddam]

absolutely my pleasure dear poet.

[Ency Bearis]

Very nice poem and great use of rhyme scheme. Lovely indeed.

[zainul]

Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Prritiy]

aha such a lovely poem of love, the lady is really lucky to have so creative and loving companion.

liked it a lot :)

[zainul]

Lovely words of review comes from lovely angel.
Glad to know that you liked it :)

[Prritiy]

its my pleasure to read and learn from you :)

[zainul]

This is a wonderful partnership.
Both of us enjoy the warmth of good gestures.

[Prritiy]

:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Michael G. Smith]

A very light touching piece. Its charm gave me a small lift this morning.

[zainul]

Thank you Smith for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
This means a world to me.

[Zoya Sahai]

Its a very unique poem. I really like the choice of words to describe each detail and the vision you have given to the reader. Its truly amazing. For a writer like me who has so much yet to grasp in poetry, you come as an inspiration. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece.

[zainul]

Hi Zoya,
It is my pleasure that you have reviewed this piece so positively.
While writing always needs sincere endeavor for improvement and perfection,no body can claim that she or he is perfect.
I feel that writing is a divine gift.I am very convinced that you are a gifted person.
For your precious review,I like to thank you from the core of my heart.
I am enlightened by your lovely words.
Thanks for everything.
Best wishes,
Zainul

[s y e]

Wow. This was beautiful.
Going into my favourites! Wonderful!

[zainul]

Hello Sye,
How do you do.
I am sorry that I am very late in responding to your lovely comment.
I am very glad that it has gone to your favourites :)
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.
Cheers!
Zainul

[Eloha]

There is a playfulness in your word choice that makes the reader smile. I was glad that your Rose felt and is different than the common ones.

[zainul]

I am very happy for your admiring review.
I appreciate you for your kind compliments.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

beautiful! seems you notice every little detail of your Rose...even so seems somehow funny nd like word games in a good way...

[zainul]

Thank you Nina for the attentive reading of the poem and inspiring review.

[Poetic Beauty]

The flow is smooth amd their is stunning details in this piece

[zainul]

Thank you for the inspiring review.

[Allie]

This one made it into my favorites! Just lovely, absolutely lovely!

[zainul]

Thank you ,Allie.It is my pleasure that you have made the poem your favorite.
I thank you for your admiring review.