An angel may be too near of an amorous person.
But she may be far away for him to approach her.
A morning bird beckoned me here,
To meet my angel longing to share.
I felt too shy to gaze at her face,
What charm is there,I can't trace.
I saw the soft lips with very light hue,
What magic is hidden there,nobody knew.
I craved to touch the wonderful lips,
The bird stopped me to offer some tips.
I stared deep into the skies of the eyes,
I saw there rainbows playing with butterflies.
I craved to move my fingers over the gems,
The bird stopped me to offer other games.
I looked at the thin pink-colored ear.
It was so lovely with the simple gear!
I stooped to see the type of the pierce,
The bird stopped me,it looked fierce!
I switched my vision to the golden fleece,
That covered the head of my lovely bliss.
I moved to examine the sparkle of the hair,
The bird stopped me saying it would not be fair.
With broken heart, I looked at her nose,
I saw with pleasure, it bloomed like a rose!
I opted to get closer and take some smell,
The bird happily sang and wagged its tail.
this is very dearful natural poetry, I like willium Wordsworth poetry of nature, and this was like one of them. Not for comparison it is truly. Very imaginative and we can see your deep eyes on nature.
I stared deep into the skies of the eyes,
I saw there rainbows playing with butterflies.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I feel very honored and inspired by your admiring review.
Thank you dear poet for stopping by .. read moreI feel very honored and inspired by your admiring review.
Thank you dear poet for stopping by to grace this piece.
this is very dearful natural poetry, I like willium Wordsworth poetry of nature, and this was like one of them. Not for comparison it is truly. Very imaginative and we can see your deep eyes on nature.
I stared deep into the skies of the eyes,
I saw there rainbows playing with butterflies.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I feel very honored and inspired by your admiring review.
Thank you dear poet for stopping by .. read moreI feel very honored and inspired by your admiring review.
Thank you dear poet for stopping by to grace this piece.
A very light touching piece. Its charm gave me a small lift this morning.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Smith for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
This means a wo.. read moreThank you Smith for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
This means a world to me.
Its a very unique poem. I really like the choice of words to describe each detail and the vision you have given to the reader. Its truly amazing. For a writer like me who has so much yet to grasp in poetry, you come as an inspiration. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Hi Zoya,
It is my pleasure that you have reviewed this piece so positively.
While writin.. read moreHi Zoya,
It is my pleasure that you have reviewed this piece so positively.
While writing always needs sincere endeavor for improvement and perfection,no body can claim that she or he is perfect.
I feel that writing is a divine gift.I am very convinced that you are a gifted person.
For your precious review,I like to thank you from the core of my heart.
I am enlightened by your lovely words.
Thanks for everything.
Best wishes,
Zainul
Wow. This was beautiful.
Going into my favourites! Wonderful!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Hello Sye,
How do you do.
I am sorry that I am very late in responding to your lovely co.. read moreHello Sye,
How do you do.
I am sorry that I am very late in responding to your lovely comment.
I am very glad that it has gone to your favourites :)
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.
Cheers!
Zainul
This one made it into my favorites! Just lovely, absolutely lovely!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you ,Allie.It is my pleasure that you have made the poem your favorite.
I thank you fo.. read moreThank you ,Allie.It is my pleasure that you have made the poem your favorite.
I thank you for your admiring review.