Norwester Storm of May Afternoon

Norwester Storm of May Afternoon

A Poem by zainul
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Natural phenomenon has great impact

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Norwester blew across the fruiting mango grove
Thunder,lightning,hails and strong wind rushed together
Birds stopped singing while rain sprinkled shower
The sun disappeared lending the world a dark robe

A magic happened very soon
The storm vanished leaving a bright space
Sunshine played everywhere with divine grace
The dangerous Norwester became a pleasing boon

With the touch of raindrops  mangoes  looked bigger
The mango  leaves glittered like gold
Grasses of the grove were lovely and bold
The soil emitted fragrance farther and farther

Birds resumed their songs again
Brain Fever bird is happy for bringing rain
Black Drongo,Pied Myna and Bulbul birds flew
They collected insects for food from their view

A group of children came from nowhere
They competed with each other for fallen fruit
Later all sat together to share
Then mixed salt and chili for making tasty food

The Norwester storm of May afternoon
Brought bliss in sweltering heat very soon

© 2023 zainul


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The author is wonderfully telling us that storms have benefits and are temporary; a picture of what goes on in our life, for us to see the silver lining, the fruits for all to enjoy. Storms are normally hazardous, but if only we can see through and through.
Marvelous Zainul!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear friend for stopping by and inspire me by the insightful review.Please pray for us and.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

All rich blessings from Allah(subhanahu wa taala).
You are welcome.



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Beautifully written with vivid imagery making the reader feel as though they were there. I like this a lot! ~Sharon

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Months Ago

Thank you Sharon for the inspiring review.
The author is wonderfully telling us that storms have benefits and are temporary; a picture of what goes on in our life, for us to see the silver lining, the fruits for all to enjoy. Storms are normally hazardous, but if only we can see through and through.
Marvelous Zainul!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear friend for stopping by and inspire me by the insightful review.Please pray for us and.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

All rich blessings from Allah(subhanahu wa taala).
You are welcome.
Similar weather in my Michigan my friend.
"The Norwester storm of May afternoon
Brought bliss in sweltering heat very soon"
The above lines. Hot Summer day will come and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear friend for stopping by to inspire me by your insightful review.I am very pleased to n.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I enjoy the warm days after the cold Winter. You are welcome my friend.
An impressive poem wow keep writing, loved the mention of bulbuls my fav song bird. Kudos to this great poetry!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear poet for stopping by and finding your favorite song bird in the poem.
I will .. read more
After the storm came many benefits. Beautiful descriptive poetry zainul of a part of the world unknown to me. You brought it alive. You also brought it to my doorstep. Love the wetness and glisten in this poem of contrasts. A smart composition.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

1 Year Ago

Dear Chris ,
Your heartfelt review is like a soothing shower in a hot summer day.Thank you fo.. read more
I like this; there is plenty of beautiful imagery

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jennifer for the inspiring review.
The world was dark with that blasting northwester hitting the groves.... but afterwards when the sun came out everything sparkled like new, even better....songbirds sang once more and we know that a storm can be a good thing to cool down a heat wave!
Nice write! vivid images!
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

1 Year Ago

Thank you Betty for the wonderful review.
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You’re very welcome, much appreciated
Best, B
"lending the world a dark robe"---love that image.
lots of interesting imagery appears in this piece.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

zainul

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jacob for stopping by and inspiring me for the work.

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Added on May 3, 2023
Last Updated on May 4, 2023
Tags: Norwester, mango, birds, bliss, storm

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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