Birthday During War

War is not a game ,it is an exercise of  life and death

War erupts from conflicts of interests or religious faith

You didn’t expect procession of war victims around you 

But cruel reality brought suddenly ugly and painful view

Peace or war whatever happens ,the events  of time will not cease

You are facing your birthday in such a tumultuous moment

You will not plan a pleasant ceremony for enjoyment  and ease.

But make sure to celebrate the day of birth as your exclusive event.

We are marking the moment despite scream of suffering people

Let there be peace ,let the war is over ,let there be happy ripple.

We hope your forthcoming birthdays will not be tarnished  by war

Wish you a very happy birthday !Enjoy a lovely and divine shower.

Reviews

[M]

It must be very difficult to celebrate any occasion when one is caught in the whirlwind of war. The death, violence and suffering would make us feel too guilty to celebrate. We have to be grateful for small mercies, however. A birthday means we are still alive when many other unfortunates have lost theirs in war. The world really needs peace and an end to suffering.

[zainul]

Thank you Makhabat for the insightful review.This piece was written for my beloved son to observe his birth day during the war.I understand your feeling about your war and respect your opinion.

[W. Barrett Munn]

These meaningless wars are like deja vu of my high school years during Vietnam.
I hated it then; nothing has changed about my position .

Winston

[zainul]

Thank you very much for your insightful review.
I really feel enlightened by this review.

[Coyote Poetry]

So many parts of the world is struggling. I enjoyed the birthday poetry. I hope for the same. One day of peace in my lifetime. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[zainul]

Thank you dear poet for the inspiring review.
Many contradicting factors influence the dynamics of wars. But common peoples have to struggle for survival. It is uncertain when all people around the world will be able to taste the absolute peace.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend and you are welcome.

[Carola]

yes zainul, war is a terrible thing, country leaders never seem to be satisfied with what they have.

if the leaders themselves were required to be at the front line & face the possibility of death themselves they might re-think their greed or whatever,

re birthdays, I don't like celebrating them it reminds me i'm getting older & closer to my coffin! yes I know that's a bit of negative thinking but it's still how I feel about birthdays.

blue skies to you, cheerio carola

[zainul]

Thank you Carola for the mind blowing comment.
I hope you are doing well.

[Betty Hermelee]

Loss of life is so troubling these days with mass shootings and a war in Europe; it's hard to find some happiness, some hope that soon times will be better. So, no matter what is happens on your special say, one should celebrate, because these dark days may go on for some time, before we see the light
Very relatable.
Best, B

[zainul]

Dear Betty ,
I feel very blessed by your thoughtful words.I agree with your kind observations which reflect the tumultous period the world is passing through currently.
Best,
Zainul

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Z
Best, B

[Chris Shaw]

Dear zainul, we live in such troubled times and it is heartbreaking to know so many lives are being lost. Decent people want war over and for peace to be in place. It is difficult to celebrate birthdays while such suffering is going on. I wish and pray for peace and also that there are many happy birthdays for everyone. You words echo the thoughts of many.

Chris

[zainul]

Dear Chris,
I am very impressed by your kind review.Thank you for stopping by and inspiring the people who love to live in peace.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome zainul. Have a lovely day.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

An uplifting and positive message that is so needed in these tumultuous times. Happy Birthday to whoever you wrote it for. Awesome truth you share with us.

[zainul]

Thank you Sami for the wonderful review.War shatters our lives.Let there be peace ,let the war is over ,let there be happy ripple.

[Sami Khalil]

I do agree dear poet and friend. You are welcome.
May your prayers ascend to the Throne of God...

[zainul]

Thank you dear poet and friend for the solidarity.Our prayers may bring peace in this world.

[Sami Khalil]

Allah willing. InshaAllah.