Love Story

Lemon tree and lime butterfly dance with joy

Rain drops playing with lemon leaves,

Little lemon tree sway in the gusty wind.

Lovely lime butterfly feeling very jealous.

Why strange villains together conspired!

 

The butterfly flies around in great anger,

Losing her love she began to flutter in pain.

She could foresee the impending danger,

She must be ready for fighting to regain.

 

Frolicking wind and rain drops saw a rose

And rushed to it for playing game of love.

The amorous flower embraced them close,

She was very happy to find dream dove.

 

Surprised beauty could not think of such end,

She danced with joy with her lifelong friend.

 

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

The butterfly flies around in great anger,
Losing her love she began to flutter in pain.

Wow, such imagery in these words here, This is a very good write. much enjoyed

[zainul]

Thank you for the wonderful words.

[Laurel Oak]

This is cute and innocent. Liked it!

[zainul]

Thank you Laurel for the lovely review.

[Abhishek Asthana]

Innocence is put in so well in this lovely write.... ended so beautifully with a sparky feeling.... Charmingly written... Thank you for sharing !!

[zainul]

Thank you Abhishek for stopping by and inspiring me with the insightful review.

[Rye]

Such an amazing lovely write...

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the amazing words.

[Rye]

you have talent, i enjoyed this

[zainul]

I am humbled.Thank you very much.

[Chris Shaw]

Delightful imagery. A most appealing little love story. Read your lines several times zainul. Love the references to nature.Well done.

Chris

[zainul]

Dear Chris,I feel very horored that you read the lines several times.Thank you very much.
Stay safe and keep us in your prayers.

[Chris Shaw]

So important to keep safe zainul. You are in my prayers I assure you as are many other parts of the world. Particularly those where the people already suffer so, and now more so with corona on the spread.

[zainul]

Very nice of you compassionate poet.

[Lydia Shutter]

The birds and the bees do it.....and so do the butterflies. Such a lovely romantic write, Zainul. Lydi**

[zainul]

Thank you Lydi for the amazing review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nature, although love there is more primal, is also at times much more beautiful.

j.

[zainul]

Thank you Jacob for the insightful words.

[Sara]

A beautiful and different take on love which reminds us what love truly is ,in a world where we let the same old cliches define it..

[zainul]

Thank you for kindly stopping by.Your lovely review inspired me a lot.

[Betty Hermelee]

You have lovely images here of rain drops, lemon trees, wind, flowers, all creat a sweet love poem, nice work

[zainul]

Thanks for stopping by and inspiring me with the lovely review.

[poetgurl]

This is so wonderful, and beautiful

[zainul]

Thank you for the great review.