Hypocrite

When ugly hypocrites join hands

Innocent people lose their hope

They are menaced by the bands

They seek divine help to cope


But divine help is not that easy

People suffer from fear and stress

Hypocrites howl to keep them busy

Their normal lives change to mess


The brave hearts that can endure

The nasty tricks of horrid devils

Win at last and become secure

From the lethal offense of evils


We need courage to fight the hypocrites


Patience is extra power for their treats

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Hypocrites are two-faced or many faced. They stand on no moral ground but their egos and whims. They prey on others to make them fools and victims. They join hands with the evil ones and plot socially, politically and gossipy against others. No good comes out of them and their schemes. An excellent subject you have tackled here dear poet with excellence of your pen...:).....

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the heart warming review.
You have portrayed the devilish hypocrites perfectly.
I am very glad that you stopped by and contributed such a precious review on the piece.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time....:)..........

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I agree with you here, hypocrites are very two faced and could quite possibly snobby too. Very well expressed.

Kaze~

[zainul]

Thank you for the wonderful review.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Anytime. :-)))

[PearlPoet]

I missed your wisdom dear Poet! Its so nice to stumble upon them tonight...
Hypocrite lives in all of us, I know it does in me but I have opened my heart to Love and Understanding
and it helped me immensely to conquer it....

[zainul]

I am very pleased that you have identified hypocrites in all of us.
Yes,I do agree with you.read moreI am very pleased that you have identified hypocrites in all of us.
Yes,I do agree with you.
Then we need to fight against the hypocrites in ourselves first and then wage war against the hypocrites living in others.
Thank you for the enlightening review.

[Cryingkate]

Hello My Friend,

I saw this Pop up again in the live feed and re read it and I have another thought.
This thought is that we shouldn't try to enter a battle with the Hypocrites.
Just as we are not suppose to wrestle with Evil but to flee..
I believe that the divine help is easier when we understand where the fight really is.
Just as the book says not to fight the Evil but flee or ignore.
The real fight I see in this write is the suffering Of Fear and Stress.
We can learn to conquer Fear and Stress.
The real danger is how we perceive and react to what we cannot change.
But we can change ourselves. Whatever we think about becomes our reality.
What would the Fear Monger gain if we had no Fear?
How could we be persecuted if we feel no suffering?
"Though I am in prison I am free"
Everything we need, is within. All changes come from within. All Answers are within. Heaven = Nirvana is within. When we have no fear, we are free.
Everything is perception.. Perception is a fractal view of vibrational light. Of Thought.

Ok that's my thought :-) Ps Good to see You again.
If we learn to have no fear and stress then what harm can come to us?

[zainul]

Thank you for taking time to enrich my understanding through your thoughtful analysis.
I am convinced that fear and stress are two factors that greatly influence our behavior.
Have a nice time,dear friend.

[Cryingkate]

Thank You Zainul for crediting me for thoughtful analysis as though it was all thought out and found a certain conclusion. Though I have thought and thought I still cannot conclude a concise neat explanation. I wish i could. Instead it haunts me.
The subject haunts me. There are so many fine lines and Yes I do see the answer is within,but it doesn't mean that total pacifism will solve anything. I feel the answer is somewhere within the withdrawal that the fight leads to Victory. The just so right mind frame. Someplace found after the removal of Fear and insecurity. Somewhere where the Victor Shines. Perhaps what I am looking to describe is the All powerful, all knowing, Victor of the God Within. When we know who we are.
There have been times in my own life when I just had to face the fear and had to conquer it in order to get thru situations and when I did something happens and the danger disappeared and what I was fighting just vanished. All i did was conquer the fear and adjust my thinking.

Yes I agree Fear and stress does influence our behavior. every thought we think, affects our behavior and the results ( our world around us)
I hope my conversation isn't sounding like a rant. I am so glad you brought this matter to the table. This is something as I said that haunts me to have full understanding of. I need to know the answers and struggle alone in my thoughts to find it. It helps greatly to discuss it with someone . A chance to reflect and organize my own thoughts too.

Your a Good Soul Zainul, I appreciate your talented writes and thoughts. I very much enjoy drinking from the same cup with you.
Peace be with you Friend.
Connie

[Thornbirds]

The bottom line is a poem all by itself and says volumes.

[zainul]

I am very inspired by your wonderful review.
Thank you for stopping by to grace the work.

[Jennifer]

Yes, I dedicate this to my hypocritical room mate (ex-friend) Bianca. This is her last month here. Power to me, woo!

[zainul]

Thank you Jennifer for dedicating this to your hypocritical room mate.
I am very glad that this work has been utilized for a genuine reason.

[Baby Ricochet]

Hypocrites are everywhere. Good poem

[zainul]

Yes,Baby they are everywhere.
Thank you dear poet for taking time to read and grace the work with your lovely review.

[Cryingkate]

Reminder :-)
"Don't Feed The Bears" :-)
Remember the Sweet Love of the Magnolia's All is well and will be Well.
We are in good hands.
All things do pass away and all things are reborn.
Whatever we dwell on is what will be.
Remember the Garden and all her Majesty and omniscience
Feel the vibrations of love as though it were a song, dancing messages by the divine messenger system :-)

Hugs my friend Missed you!

[zainul]

Thank you dear poet for stopping by to enlighten with great words of wisdom.
I am very glad that we are deliberating again for the betterment of mankind.

[Cryingkate]

Funny... As I read and felt your shared thoughts I suddenly felt like we were traveling in our own super tech flying bumper car personalized fly craft :-) Perhaps that is a hit of the Gilden age and past things done away with :-)

[Cryingkate]

golden age .............typo

[Marie]

Patience is power, but it's a very hard thing to have. Constant likes bring on war and poverty, and it's hard to wait quietly for something else to happen. In fact, we don't wait quietly but start more trouble.

[zainul]

Thank you Marie for the mind blowing observation.
Yes,we start trouble instead of waiting quietly.
Thank you for stopping by to grace the work.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

those who tell the truth endure...but they also can sleep at night in peace....the hypocrites talk from both sides of their mouths always.

really like this poem

[zainul]

Thank you Jacob for taking time to read and review the work.
You have pointed out the essence of the write with your insight.
I am very happy that you liked the poem.