Hypocrite

When ugly hypocrites join hands

Innocent people lose their hope

They are menaced by the bands

They seek divine help to cope


But divine help is not that easy

People suffer from fear and stress

Hypocrites howl to keep them busy

Their normal lives change to mess


The brave hearts that can endure

The nasty tricks of horrid devils

Win at last and become secure

From the lethal offense of evils


We need courage to fight the hypocrites


Patience is extra power for their treats

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Hypocrites are two-faced or many faced. They stand on no moral ground but their egos and whims. They prey on others to make them fools and victims. They join hands with the evil ones and plot socially, politically and gossipy against others. No good comes out of them and their schemes. An excellent subject you have tackled here dear poet with excellence of your pen...:).....

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the heart warming review.
You have portrayed the devilish hypocrites perfectly.
I am very glad that you stopped by and contributed such a precious review on the piece.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time....:)..........

[Neeharika Neehu]

u've written the truth in the most effective way,somehow i can relate this to a political scenario,i am sorry if it does not mean that :)

[zainul]

Thank you Neeharika for taking time to read and review the work.
I am very glad that you could relate it.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

true true true.......
its ironic how hypocrite stay together............
beautiful poem sir.......
i loved it!!!
:)

[zainul]

Thank you Pushkar for your inspiring review.

[Jamestown]

Terrific and absolutely true, great write, thanks for sharing.

[zainul]

I am very pleased to read your inspiring review.
Thank you for stopping by.

[Blood Ink Diary]

And, well, what a treat to read your writings after my long hiatus from Writers Cafe.
Always a pleasure to read your thoughts - leaves one feeling a sudden need to return soon.
Yes, hypocrites plague our world with their masks - your poem says it all, dear Zainul. Cheers my friend

[zainul]

Thank you Shaheen for glorifying my humble efforts.
Hope to illuminate myself from your works soon.

[Chris]

Haven't seen you in a while...I hope all is well with you and your family...

[zainul]

Thank you Chris for the nice words.
I feel very happy to know that I have a place in your heart.
Yea,all is well with me and my family.
Wish you and all members of your family a very Happy New Year 2015.

[Cindy Marietta]

Really love the subject of this poem. You don't read too many about hypocrites, yet they are so relevant. Thanks for bringing this to life! Beautifully written.

[zainul]

I am very glad that you stopped by to grace this write with your excellent review.

[Leticia Z]

They are a sad people who exist in every culture and live for one thing.
To expose the next big thing. I find these time wasters to be everywhere.
However, the important thing is to overcome.
Powerful writing. Inspired by a great observation.

[zainul]

Thank you Leticia for the inspiring review.
I am very pleased that you took time to read the work.

[sakshi arora]

such a lovely poem. its true that our fears dont let us do many things against such people. a sensible one sir

[zainul]

Thank you Sakshi for stopping by to glorify the piece.
I feel very inspired by your nice words.

[Matching Socks]

Very wise words spoken zainul.
We need to lead by example.
But all too often I hear, do as I say not as I do.

[zainul]

Thank you Ana for the wonderful review.
I am very pleased that you stopped by to grace this work.

[Michael G.]

Good and true thoughts, my friend. Keep up the good fight.

[zainul]

Thank you Michael for the inspiring review.
The fight with words gets more powerful when you express solidarity.

[Michael G.]

You are absolutely correct. I hope the new year will see your fight successful.