Your anger makes me wonder of how much you know about politics or the person you are writing this poem about... Stopping something as hurtful and unfair as the situation you have described will take more than one voice and more than words ( not under estimating the power of words)...
This is well written though I wished it was longer with more scenes of injustice
It has been very long since I last read you something and I cant wait to read more
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Dear Yasmin,
Thank you for the excellent review.
I feel very inspired by your amazing re.. read moreDear Yasmin,
Thank you for the excellent review.
I feel very inspired by your amazing review.
I will consider adding more scenes of injustice.
Best regards,
Zainul
It is a pleasure to read your writes whether you take my advice or you dont your work is wonderful t.. read moreIt is a pleasure to read your writes whether you take my advice or you dont your work is wonderful the way it is but that was the only idea racing my mind that your rage deserves more energy of you
Please enlighten me with a visit of my profile
9 Years Ago
Thanks for the compliments.
I will review your work tonight.
Have a nice time.
i certainly do...and this week, the shooting down of the plane with all the innocents aboard...they are raping humanity...
i feel your anger.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
You have perfectly perceived the pain in my heart.
Thank you Jacob for feeling my anger and ex.. read moreYou have perfectly perceived the pain in my heart.
Thank you Jacob for feeling my anger and express solidarity.
Evil does what evil wants and the us the righteous ones will never comprehend it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
We need to comprehend and denounce the evil.Thank you for stopping by to express solidarity.
10 Years Ago
Comprehending evil is a futile task left to fools. We can only share the message of hope, lead by ex.. read moreComprehending evil is a futile task left to fools. We can only share the message of hope, lead by example and teach how to love. Evil has no conscience. Look how Hamas hides it's missiles in schools and civilians homes knowing they will be killed and then the can use their deaths to further their goals. Who does such things but evil men.
We seem to be plagued by tyrants in all periods of our existence but it never has been, nor never will be the way of good men. They are evil and their will is to do harm to the innocent to increase their power. I do not understand how they can justify their actions - perhaps they are just too malevolent to be able to consider the pain and suffering of other souls.
Your words bring to the forefront of our attention how horrible such savage atrocity really is!! People are beheaded, abducted, tortured, displaced and for what? I do not have a proper answer, but I know it is indeed savage!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Sheila for taking time to read and contribute your precious words to express your solidari.. read moreThank you Sheila for taking time to read and contribute your precious words to express your solidarity.
I could see a writer, pressing hard into the page, under the reddest of passions. I commend your spirit, honesty, and focus. Thank you for writing want should rightfully be in all our hearts.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you dear poet for stopping by and express your solidarity.
An excellent message to those tyrants and mass killers no matter what country they come and culture. Right is right and wrong is wrong and two wrongs does not make one thing right. Bravo, sir...:)...................
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Sami for the strong message.
It is the high time to raise voice against the killers,.. read moreThank you Sami for the strong message.
It is the high time to raise voice against the killers,tyrants,rapists and all kinds of abusers.
Poets can't keep silent now.
Let's compel the beasts to stop their crime against humanity.