Your anger makes me wonder of how much you know about politics or the person you are writing this poem about... Stopping something as hurtful and unfair as the situation you have described will take more than one voice and more than words ( not under estimating the power of words)...
This is well written though I wished it was longer with more scenes of injustice
It has been very long since I last read you something and I cant wait to read more
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Dear Yasmin,
Thank you for the excellent review.
I feel very inspired by your amazing re.. read moreDear Yasmin,
Thank you for the excellent review.
I feel very inspired by your amazing review.
I will consider adding more scenes of injustice.
Best regards,
Zainul
It is a pleasure to read your writes whether you take my advice or you dont your work is wonderful t.. read moreIt is a pleasure to read your writes whether you take my advice or you dont your work is wonderful the way it is but that was the only idea racing my mind that your rage deserves more energy of you
Please enlighten me with a visit of my profile
9 Years Ago
Thanks for the compliments.
I will review your work tonight.
Have a nice time.
A powerful poem full of plenty of raw emotion. Great work and, as a former police officer, understand exactly where you are coming from.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I feel blessed to have a thoughtful review from a former police officer.
I thank you from th.. read moreI feel blessed to have a thoughtful review from a former police officer.
I thank you from the core of my heart for stopping by to inspire me.
and one day it will stop
we can walk down the streets in safety
with out fear let`s just hope it`s soon
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Wordman for your thoughtful words.
Yes,we can hope for a safe world for all peoples.. read moreThank you Wordman for your thoughtful words.
Yes,we can hope for a safe world for all peoples.
the sadness of this world prevails.
yet there is so much joy to be had
I will pray with you that these people who are in charge will
change their actions and hatred to love.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Leticia for your great gesture.
The world will become a heaven if these people chang.. read moreThank you Leticia for your great gesture.
The world will become a heaven if these people change their actions.
As always, I truly respect your honest and sincere call for a kinder world, where each can see and have peace . . . together. A very honest write and an enjoyable read.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I am really humbled by your lovely words,dear friend.
Thank you for taking time to read and r.. read moreI am really humbled by your lovely words,dear friend.
Thank you for taking time to read and review this work.
9 Years Ago
If only more people of the world had your heart, my kind friend.
Your anger makes me wonder of how much you know about politics or the person you are writing this poem about... Stopping something as hurtful and unfair as the situation you have described will take more than one voice and more than words ( not under estimating the power of words)...
This is well written though I wished it was longer with more scenes of injustice
It has been very long since I last read you something and I cant wait to read more
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Dear Yasmin,
Thank you for the excellent review.
I feel very inspired by your amazing re.. read moreDear Yasmin,
Thank you for the excellent review.
I feel very inspired by your amazing review.
I will consider adding more scenes of injustice.
Best regards,
Zainul
It is a pleasure to read your writes whether you take my advice or you dont your work is wonderful t.. read moreIt is a pleasure to read your writes whether you take my advice or you dont your work is wonderful the way it is but that was the only idea racing my mind that your rage deserves more energy of you
Please enlighten me with a visit of my profile
9 Years Ago
Thanks for the compliments.
I will review your work tonight.
Have a nice time.
I agree with Marie, in that the crimes against humanity will never cease. It will take more than words...but let us not turn away in angst!
Wonderful, my friend!
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Kelly for your inspirational words.
Such support really matters.
Have a nice t.. read moreThank you Kelly for your inspirational words.
Such support really matters.
Have a nice time,dear friend.:)